Six Knights in Shining Armor ~*~Poem of the Week~*~
A knight has come, although this one darkfrom eyes forced shutby a fisted mark..... ......and screams for a knight in shining armorThe bottle empty, still and shattered, a mimic of her heart,the tears...
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Very creative and original. This is very good SM...love it!
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Again, very creative work.. delicate topic to tell about though you did it very well without useless artifacts.Bravo._________________________________________________ Musann The Fields Caf de la Paix...
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CHILLING is the way you tell this tale of pain, sadness and it's most clever ending. Girl, this is one of the best poems I've ever read and the repetition of "six knights in shining armor" .... until...
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~S~Congratulations on Mireille's pick for Poem of the Week!~dawn~Follow me to Poetic Constellations...bleed my ink...etched in whispers....."and when you find you're spending your time wanting for...
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Quote:......from the gun comes six knights in shining armor~ this one crawls inside the heart in deep memory placesnot the gun, but the rest of it...but you have captured this to perfection, my Sultry...
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Oh I love the ending... that metaphor is superb! I'm green with envy. ;) SharonSugarmuser Why take the heart of another and replace it with your own?
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I LOVE THIS!!!!!! Excellent! And I am hugging you just because you let me! Always,TR
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Very intense look at an abusive relationship that ends in a final act of violence. Many such relationships do end in that final act of violence, just it's the abuser who is the one with the gun.One of...
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back to explore this a little further, and i must say it gets even better...SharonSugarmuser Why take the heart of another and replace it with your own?
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a re-visit..to one of the most excellently written poems ever from it's beginning to the surprise ending!GO RAVE GO!
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